Corrections include:

- a couple of grammatical issues fixed
- use term "change privileges" instead of "read/write/delete" just like
  NT/2000 does
- fixed <code>System</code> to <code>LocalSystem</code>


git-svn-id: https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/httpd/httpd/branches/APACHE_2_0_BRANCH@98002 13f79535-47bb-0310-9956-ffa450edef68