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| 0007277 | TST001 - Pre-deployment Validation report | [NFV Specifications] Clarification | public | 05-01-2016 14:32 | 16-01-2016 15:45 | ||||
| Reporter | aelken | ||||||||
| Assigned To | Rajesh Rajamani | ||||||||
| Priority | normal | ||||||||
| Status | resolved | Resolution | fixed | ||||||
| Product Version | V0.1.3 | ||||||||
| Target Version | Fixed in Version | ||||||||
| Summary | 0007277: Review of TST001 v0.1.3 | ||||||||
| Description | All comments and related page numbering below refer to version 0.1.3 in the clean version. General (whole document): Update reference marks to referenced documents Page 5: Update table of contents according to chapter structure (remove entry for page 4, include subchapters for chapter 6 which might require header format changes for all headers within chapter 6. Page 8, chapter 2.2: Include the following references to the list of informative references (referenced in chapter 6): ETSI GS NFV-INF 004 Network Functions Virtualization (NFV); Infrastructure; Hypervisor Domain 3GPP TS23.002 Network Architecture 3GPP TR21.905 Vocabulary for 3GPP Specifications 3GPP TS22.278 Service Requirements for the Evolved Packet System (EPS) Page 9, chapter 4.1: Replace the sentence "The following clauses describe the general definitions of SUTs, the test environment, thetest device, the NFV components considered as SUTs for pre-deployment validation, and the required test environments." by sentence "The following clauses describe the general definitions of SUTs, the test environment, the test function and the NFV components considered as SUTs for pre-deployment validation." Page 10 ff, chapter 4.3 ff: Replace all occurrences of "test device" by "test function", consider figures as well Page 15, chapters 5 and 5.1: Are chapters with headers only without content allowed? Page 15 ff, chapters 5.1 and 5.2: Shall we keep the terms "Device under test (DUT)" and "test device"? In chapter 4 we have introduced the terms "Function under test (FUT)" and "test function" instead, the terminology needs to be aligned within the document to stay consistent. Page 17, chapter 5.1.4, heading: Correct typo "Tetsing" Page 18, fourth bullet: Remove duplicated word "from" Page 24: Correct the table numbering in the capture from "Table 6.11" into "Table 6.1" Page 25: Correct the figure numbering in the capture from "Figure 6.11" into "Figure 6.1" Page 25, "Test environment": Correct figure reference from "Figure 2" into "Figure 6.2" Page 28, page 29, editor's notes: So far no contributions have been submitted for new proposals of the tables 6.2 and 6.3. How to handle the editor's note for publishing the GS? Proposal is to keep the tables as they are and remove the editor's notes. Page 36, editor's note: How to resolve the editor's note? It was originally introduced to indicate potential additional test cases. So far no contributions for additional test case descriptions have been submitted. Proposal is to replace the editor's note by explaining that additional test cases for metrics listed in chapter 6.2 can be applied. Page 36, chapter 6.6, "Description": Correct figure reference from "Figure 4" into "Figure 6.4" Page 38, "Step 2": Correct table reference from "Table 2" into "Table 6.2", correct table reference from "Table 3" into "Table 6.3", correct table reference from "Table 1" into "Table 6.1" Page 39, editor's note: Add the missing document references to chapter 2.2 (see comment above), update the reference marks to these documents in chapter 6 and remove the editor's note. Page 39, chapter 7: remove empty heading numbers Page 39, chapter 7.1: Replace the sentences "This clause proposes methods and metrics to validate the successful instantiation and termination of VNFs. VNF scaling test methodologies are examined in clause 8." by sentence "This clause proposes methods and metrics to validate the successful instantiation, scaling and termination of VNFs." Page 44, "Configuration": Correct figure reference from "Figure 7.3" into "Figure 7.4" Page 45 ff, chapter 7.1.3: Replace all occurrences of "test device" by "test PNF" Page 52, step 12: Add a check to verify that no traffic disturbance is introduced by the scale-in operation (graceful traffic isolation of VNFC to be removed). That could be checks on lost session states etc., similar to checks in step 2 of 7.1.4. Page 53, "Test Verdict": Replace "step 11" by "step12" in sentence "The scale in of VNFUT from Flavour B to Flavour A is deemed successful …" Page 55: remove empty heading numbers Page 55, editor's note: which of the addressed items are resolved by now? Can the editor's note be removed? Page 72, chapter 8, editor's note: which of the addressed items are resolved by now? Can the editor's note be removed? Page 75 ff, chapter 8.3: Replace all occurrences of "test device" by "test PNF" Page 83: Remove empty chapters 9 and 10 Page 84: Do we need Annex A? If yes, content is missing, if not, empty Annex A needs to be removed and the following annexes need to be renumbered Page 84: Do we need Annex C? If yes, content is missing, if not, empty Annex C needs to be removed and the following annexes need to be renumbered Page 85: Some revisions are missing in the history. But potentially the history will be replaced when being published. | ||||||||
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(0013666) aelken (reporter) 07-01-2016 10:34 |
This list includes all comments which are still valid and not yet resolved by updated version of the document available as contribution NFVTST(16)000001r2. All comments and related page numbering below refer to version 0.1.3 in the clean version. General (whole document): Update reference marks to referenced documents Page 8, chapter 2.2: Include the following references to the list of informative references (referenced in chapter 6): ETSI GS NFV-INF 004 Network Functions Virtualization (NFV); Infrastructure; Hypervisor Domain 3GPP TS23.002 Network Architecture 3GPP TR21.905 Vocabulary for 3GPP Specifications 3GPP TS22.278 Service Requirements for the Evolved Packet System (EPS) Page 15 ff, chapters 5.1 and 5.2: Shall we keep the terms "Device under test (DUT)" and "test device"? In chapter 4 we have introduced the terms "Function under test (FUT)" and "test function" instead, the terminology needs to be aligned within the document to stay consistent. Page 28, page 29, editor's notes: So far no contributions have been submitted for new proposals of the tables 6.2 and 6.3. How to handle the editor's note for publishing the GS? Proposal is to keep the tables as they are and remove the editor's notes. Page 39, editor's note: Add the missing document references to chapter 2.2 (see comment above), update the reference marks to these documents in chapter 6 and remove the editor's note. Page 45 ff, chapter 7.1.3: Replace all occurrences of "test device" by "test PNF" Page 52, step 12: Add a check to verify that no traffic disturbance is introduced by the scale-in operation (graceful traffic isolation of VNFC to be removed). That could be checks on lost session states etc., similar to checks in step 2 of 7.1.4. Page 55, editor's note: which of the addressed items are resolved by now? Can the editor's note be removed? Page 72, chapter 8, editor's note: which of the addressed items are resolved by now? Can the editor's note be removed? Page 75 ff, chapter 8.3: Replace all occurrences of "test device" by "test PNF" Page 85: Some revisions are missing in the history. But potentially the history will be replaced when being published. |
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(0013713) Rajesh Rajamani (developer) 16-01-2016 15:40 |
All of Joerg's proposed changes (from his contribution) have been added to version 0.1.4 and submitted for WG approval. The list of references and abbreviations have been expanded. Reference marks to the referenced documents have been updated. Change History updated on page 85 Added a check to step 12 on 53 similar to checks in step 2 of 7.1.4 All references to test devices have been replaced by Test PNF All resolved editor's notes have been removed (in clause 7 and 8) |
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| Date Modified | Username | Field | Change |
| 05-01-2016 14:32 | aelken | New Issue | |
| 05-01-2016 15:58 | Silvia Almagia | Product Version | => V0.1.3 |
| 07-01-2016 10:34 | aelken | Note Added: 0013666 | |
| 07-01-2016 11:26 | Silvia Almagia | Assigned To | => MP Odini |
| 07-01-2016 11:26 | Silvia Almagia | Status | new => assigned |
| 07-01-2016 11:26 | Silvia Almagia | Assigned To | MP Odini => Rajesh Rajamani |
| 16-01-2016 15:40 | Rajesh Rajamani | Note Added: 0013713 | |
| 16-01-2016 15:45 | Rajesh Rajamani | Status | assigned => resolved |
| 16-01-2016 15:45 | Rajesh Rajamani | Resolution | open => fixed |
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